Monday, 6 February 2012

Learning Log

What we did What we did today was Mrs.Lees went over some of the others groups learning blogs, and while we she was looking at the blogs she also explained some tips and suggestions we could use for the learning blogs. Learning Intention Why we did this was that this advice will help us in other work also in later grades or for certain jobs this will be a great perk.Another reason why we did this was the skills th at you need to understand this will be use in other work Connections/Reflections The work we covered today would be benifical to people who would want jobs that need good critiqing skills and who know how to arange there feedback to sound positive when it is actually negitive.Todays work for me was very clear and I was able to understand everything but certain parts such as the feedback explanation was a bit confusing. Homework/Tips There is no homework for today unless you didnt do anything from before. Also here some tips if you have can't thing of anything for your 30 day challenge. Think of something that can be acopmlished by you not by eg your rolemodelnj

4 comments:

  1. Justin I cant fix it Help me!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. A couple of spelling/grammar errors. A good idea may be to separate your paragraphs because it's sort of confusing to figure out where each paragraph ends. I like the fact that you said that it should be your goal, and not your idols.
    Also the homework for today is to think about what you want to accomplish for your 30 day challenge and you have to post your paragraph on the blog.

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  3. You might need to be more specific for Justin to know what you need help with. I am confused.

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  4. Umm what do you mean about what you need fixed? I agree with Ms Lees I don't understand what you need fixed. I'm confused.

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